darkshado222 2007-09-10 14:59:29

the score really is unfitting for this submission, i think it should be higher than 4.52

saltovergray 2007-09-10 19:52:47

I fived it.

Cosmos8942 2007-09-11 03:14:05

Very nice...though as both a writer and an artist (less artist unfortunently) I would like to give a couple tips here...

This is an intro. which in itself means that we should get to know the characters, perhaps a quick 6-8 second flash in the animation with one of the characters blacked out with perhaps a little history behind that said character (same for the other one as well). Also, your animation was fluid, and crafy...but it just seemed off at times. What is this 'city'? What kind of past is behind that girl, and what relationship do the two have? I could go on...but I think you get the point here...its good for an intro...but I am hoping that you throw in more depth at a later date. Excellent, another onto my favorites list =D, 5/5.

Keep 'em coming!,
-AJ-

Cosmos8942 2007-09-11 03:17:56

Pardon this second post...

One last thing before I go to bed...don't fret to PM me if you need help with the story itself...I would be glad to help and heck you don't even have to credit me :P. This is great...I just hope that the story and the depth live up to the animation.

Again I bow before you XD,
-AJ-

FreekC 2007-09-11 08:56:27

lol...

BritishMoose 2007-09-11 10:13:15

Great movie - do you consciously make your toons have similar colours?

Thank you for being an inspiration <3

TjA 2007-09-11 12:56:24

It reminds me of Akira but in brighter softer colours lacks a giant mutant monster thing though.

VespeneGas 2007-09-11 15:24:52

Love the Dr. Seuss noses.

David 2007-09-11 15:40:43

Amazing. Extremely amazing. I'm off to watch Snow White now.

notorious 2007-09-11 17:49:37

man rtil all he does is

jakeganz 2007-09-11 20:01:47

i didn't like it. the scripts were clearly stupid and the long drawn out scenes of movement were very boring. it also bothers me that there was no anime porn in this.

good job ripping off vinnie and jet set radio. thanks for ruining my life asshole.

sincerely

darksonic589556

Lalo 2007-09-11 23:02:12

mmmh i'd like to see more about the story of freetown since it seems really interesting, what i've read so far in your flash at least. if you put all that in some kind of flash narrative it would be awesome. i would had liked to see more of an animated story rather than a random race in the city, even if the animation was excellent.

notoriousm 2007-09-11 23:29:41

I LIKED THE ANIMATION RTIL :)

notorious 2007-09-11 23:30:19

whoops alt account

Slaye 2007-09-12 11:17:36

Lol i forgot to add this on the comments, Princess Aurora was the best girl you could get for the voice of violet i love her voice, it's seems soo deep and cruel. AWESOMENESS IS THE SHIZZNITZ, anyway back to reality, dude awesome, like i said can't wait for the first episodes. Great Story btw lol i just wish we could defy the laws of physics, and gravity, by jumpin soo high, and using those lgith sticks to grab the wire and now dislocating his arms.... :)

mangathessy 2007-09-12 12:47:18

i loved the intro!:D i hope you make more:P

Calvey 2007-09-13 04:54:08

I can only wonder how much sleep you get on average making something like this.
Brilliant piece of work, I've been looking forward to its release for some time and it does not disappoint in the slightest. I'll be keeping an eye out for future developments.

EztaFlash 2007-09-13 13:38:08

Stop being so awesome :3

jcat4 2007-09-13 17:06:46

Wow..Awesome. Yeah, and by the way, what kinda microphone did you use?

nintendork64 2007-09-13 22:12:31

i swear, i cant get enough of that movie! you should make a whole series! ...or do you have one already?